Comments on: Files Page 03

By: walterostlie

walterostlie — Wed, 05 Apr 2017 10:47:33 +0000

In reply to Nomen. Actually just a bad oversight on my part. But now that you bring it up, I'll have to think on it. Besides Northern Ireland won't fit.

By: Nomen

Nomen — Wed, 05 Apr 2017 02:18:24 +0000

Jumping (quite late) onto the proof-reading train: Should that say “Belfast, NORTHERN Ireland,” or is that more subtle world-building?

By: walterostlie

walterostlie — Mon, 26 Dec 2016 21:54:29 +0000

In reply to Connorses. Hah, yeah, totally. I think I wrote that as a placeholder for what I wanted it to say and never went back to change it up. I kind of like it though because Trish is so badass, what else could you possibly say? And thanks for finding the typo.

By: Connorses

Connorses — Fri, 23 Dec 2016 06:59:35 +0000

Also, there ought to be a comma after the word “However”.

By: Connorses

Connorses — Fri, 23 Dec 2016 06:58:35 +0000

I laughed to myself a little when I saw this formal document which opens with this catchy hook like they’re trying to make Trish sound cool. “Tough as nails exterior with even tougher inside.” Sounds badass, not very informative or clinical.