This first panel is almost exactly the same as the last panel. I wonder if they will be side by side in the printed book. That could be bad. Again I didn’t realize until I was coloring the page. In one way I think it works because it follows the action from the previous page since we leave Pickle in the air, unresolved, while we follow Oli to the ground. But they are still really close 🙂
Volume 2 Chapter 1 Page 16
So I wrote this page. Then I thumbnailed this page. Then I drew this page. It wasn’t until I started to color the page that I realized that Oli should be dead. How would he survive that fall? I spent a few minutes thinking about a way to fix it. But then I was like “hey this is a comic. This is shiver bureau. This is a normal thing in their world and of course he’d be able to survive.” Even if he did die he’d just come back in a few issues in typical comic fashion.
Volume 2 Chapter 1 Page 15
Cars! Every panel is cars. I was really worried my art skills wouldn’t be able to handle my writing. Actually there is a lot of stuff in this second volume that has me worried and this first chapter is the least of my concerns. But the good thing is that if I can get through it I know I will be a better artist when the dust clears.