So I did a little redesign on the kid. I wasn’t happy with his original design, even as I was drawing the page I knew I would after to change it later. I am going to go back and redraw that page as well. I wasn’t too happy with the pacing on that section either, however one of my favorite panels is in there, so I will have to reuse that piece.
We finally get to meet this little rapscallion on the next page…hmm, I don’t think I’ve ever written the word rapscallion before.
I’m getting a “Hold onto your potatoes” vibe here.
Great layout on the first page, you’re great at doing those establishing shots.